Wednesday, November 28, 2012

What Has It Come To?

This semester has been very interesting. This is my first time taking a hyprid class and I will have to say I enjoyed it. Taking this class gave me the best of both world's which consisted of half online and the other half in class. Over the semester I feel as if my writing have improved for the best. My first couple blogs started off a little rough but once they were evaluated and explained what was not working I overcame those obstacles I was facing with the other blogs and was able to succeed in the upcoming blogs. 
                                 
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"Why College" was a blog post that I was very disappointing with. Even though this blog post seemed easy, it was was taken for granted. I thought I did well, but had many grammatical errors. I didn't think the blog post out to the fullest potential. once the blog was evaluated, i realized my weaknesses and began to work on the ones that were brought to my attention thoroughly. I threw the blog together with the intentions of its being a satisfactory blog, but it turned out to be unsatisfactory due to the errors. The blog evaluation made me open my eyes on what a blog should consist of in order to be a satisfactory blog. As I reviewed my errors that occurred the most, I began to understand why such things were formatted and structured wrong.


"Is College A Waste of Time" This blog post was much  better than the previous ones. On this blog I took my time but still had a couple grammatical errors coming up. On this blog post one issue that came up was not providing enough information. I would have a good point but not enough important details to support the point. Another issue was asking the same question throughout the blog post. This blog made me realize I was not clear on implementing my ideas into the topic. I gave little to no ideas of my own towards the topic which made the post vague. this post was also had some issues of me no ending my quotations and placing quotations where they were not needed.

"College Is it Enough?" After being evaluated on the previous blogs and understanding my weaknesses, I created a satisfactory blog. On this particular blog I took everything that was said from the previous blogs, the learning plan, and made a master piece. In this post not only was the title catching, but also was straight to the point which are characteristics of a good blog. It gave my readers a sense of what was going to be discussed in this blog. The structure of this blog became stronger which gave the reader a clear guide throughout the blog post. My ideas in this post were made clear with supporting details along with some informative hyperlinks to support my ideas as well. This blog was one of my best because it was thought out thoroughly and made the reader want to continue reading.

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